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Hello everyone! Although the second book is still in correction, page layout and the search for an illustrator / her I already had a hand to the next.
well I wrote 18 pages! This time I included a summary of previous volumes, I found it was more fluid and less boring for me to write , insert it into the body, into the fabric of the narrative, the first chapter ... we started, as is my custom, with secondary characters, and that center is not centered with the main story. It 's kind of "Flight of approach" is a long way and return slowly to the main story.
The summary and the resumption of the narrative strands are entrusted to Ayane, morose as usual, and in large part to Parvaneh, so that we can have an opinion on first-hand what these two think of the whole complicated affair in they are trapped: they both are in fact the most thoughtful and cutlery, and those that still have a minimum of rationality. It was important to know what you think!
Ah, the title of the episode 2.2? For the moment is a temporary "Academy of Magic."

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A big announcement today! With the 37th chapter, entitled "Ties" is finally After the second episode of Tomotomopoppin "Ephesian Rhapsody!
Rejoice!
After years of endless thoughts, feel like giving up, sadness, enthusiasm sudden death and blood, now this is my third book sees an end! How many times I have rewritten this book? Too many, as to have lost count. More than once I thought I could not finish it, the story of Alice and co. ends abruptly here ... I was not able to tell it.
Too many choices I would have stood, too many wires going in every direction! So much so that this summer I finally decided to abandon the project ... but then, what happened? I do not know: one morning I woke up and I realized that I could ... I had to go on! So first thing I put forward the first episode and then I put into this second ... I changed the numbering of the books, I shared the third book in three, of which this is the first part and I've renamed "the second episode."
not see him everything was easy, I cut and added a lot ... was in a dire state when I picked up! It was like the tower of Ehuresya, a complete disaster!
But now it's over!
Now I "only" read everything, give the last touches, some colorful cushions, check the spelling ... and find the designs for the cover, of course!
But the worst is over.
If I have to take stock Now, I must say that it was worth it, especially for my characters, I finally seems to have something to say. And that did not deserve to be forgotten and disappear.
If you think about it now, the character that I like most is Parvaneh (Sendo's cousin). It 's a pretty young girl and shy, but who knows how to find a great courage in himself, perhaps by the same "normal" that opposes all the others. I do cheer for you, Parvaneh!

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Chapter 35, this chapter originally was titled `` The parade.'' In reality, however, there was talk of this event in a very cursory, and only as a foreshadowing of a central event which will take place in the next book ... Therefore, given the very heterogeneous content of the chapter, I tried another more appropriate title.
I have come to call `` solution''complicated situations, which is coupled with `` difficult''Reports, Chapter 33. The heterogeneity of the chapter in fact suggested to put under this label the various events that take place there, they see one part of the development Erastos, on the other that of Sendo, and in half the usual confusion of Alice. And there is also room for Parvaneh! Indeed in the original draft of this chapter, `` cousin''of Sendo had a much larger, but this had led to a very marked imbalance in the economy the chapter.
So I deleted a lot of parts, which I intend to retrieve more anvanti (or maybe not, will depend on the space and structure of the story). What I mean by `` economy''of the story? This is a complex factor: in a nutshell the pace of the narrative is similar to musical rhythm. There are moments where the pace is faster, others that slows down, others where it is so solemn and sad. Similarly, the narrative is now faster and more excited for the action scenes (or when dramatic peak, when, for example, reveals a secret or a mystery dissolves, as is usually found in crime novels), now more sad (sad reflections, description environments), etc. solemn hour.
But it is not only a `` beat''dictated''by the `` fast-slow, it is also a full-rate consists of `` empty''and `` long-short''. For example, the explanation of how the Tomotomopoppin is a time `` slow, long and full''in that it is full of dialogue, there is no action, the revelations do not follow a climax (in the sense, if not the end: throughout the long description of tomotomopoppin there are peaks and changes of pace, from slow to fast! 's all `` flat''), talking about concepts very long, there is one character who speaks and others who limit to respond or comment to himself mentally. A block
so dense he can not be `` stuck''between two blocks fast, as, for example, a fight: the narrazzione become like a big elephant with two thin thin legs, as in the paintings of Dali. So
main requirement, in my opinion, a good narrative rhythm, the harmony of composition is: every item must fit into one another precisely as a machine, like a Swiss watch, at all scales, that is, from a single dialogue to the chapter that contains the dialogue and other etc.. So the part with Parvaneh
in this chapter, while useful in the development of relationships and characters, it was too heavy, unbalanced, so she was taken from here. Finally, a
color note: In this chapter we have made some interesting revelations about the book with the wood of the Ark ... in his magic formulas written in the form of plant, tree, etc.. one can not see a clear reference to the Voynich manuscript ...